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Just two more weeks left...

Two weeks from now and I'll be graduating. I've already gotten everything set up for college, and I've started making plans for the summer, but it's a matter of getting there. School is starting to stress me out again, english teacher is overwhelming us, and honestly everything is getting to be a bit too much. I'm not sure how much more of all this I can take but...*sigh* Gambatte, ne? Almost there...I can do this
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LegolasPanther Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
She poised with ease and glideness ordered,
Her dignity high, and patience bordered.
With sable hair flowing as a river,
Enticing, ready to persuade its giver.
The town where thus she holdeth near,
Busy and loud with ne'er a fear.
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LegolasPanther Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
In all her posture proud and free,
And readied for adventure readily.
Alita prepares with her boldness set,
Her heart (for now) Without regret.
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LegolasPanther Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*Enters center stage begun*
Alita: Ah, so now my path begins its run.
In all her fathomless beauty seen,
She strides in her steps to mean
What motives are thus in her heart,
With trickiness, her crafty art.
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LegolasPanther Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
For the North Wind doth blow and gust
Not honor-bound, nor filled with trust. 
With only voices of the ice to bring, 
And with its deadly beauty challenging. 

Yet in the distance of its bitter cold, 
A soul doth hide; with heart that's bold. 
For within, a fire crackles there  
Preparing with eagerness and care. 
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LegolasPanther Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, my friend I do so see
Your challenge to the Panther on poetry.
For Alita is thus to be shown,
Of course, you'll know her, she's well-known!
Now Let the war of words begin,
For I am ready to start rhymin!
With all those alliterations,
And expressive personifications.

~Legolas
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LegolasPanther Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
When you are ready thus to start, 
This poetic challenge of word art, 
Thus leave a message for me to see, 
Then the Panther will get ready. 

~The Panther 

Oh wolf there is much of me to learn, 
For in revealing it will be harder in return. 

*ambiguous panther grin*
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LegolasPanther Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Then indeed my rhymer friend, 
I will agree to this challenge you extend. 
Yet be aware for styles and forms, 
Deviated by the Panther, so be warned. ;-)

~The Panther 
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LegolasPanther Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
A challenge? Oh my, I see! 
For it twill truly thus begin
With guided words, not sleek or thin, 
And (maybe? ) a pattern to be. 

~Legolas 

PS 

For I have one more thing to say, 
Alita's message cometh tomorrow or today 
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LegolasPanther Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Greetings Tech, for I am there
On the chat thus fair and fair.
For you have many artistries,
The Panther will reveal its complexities....

~Legolas
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